Really really awesome. I've wanted to do something like this for a while.
I think there's a typo in the panel on the left third from the bottom. "The building the research was done IT housed the courtyard" should be "The building the research was done IN housed the courtyard"
The other thing is, are you using water colors and water based ink? It seems like some of your lines aren't reacting well to the water. You may do this already, but you should water color first, wait for it to dry, then add your lines. Sorry of that sounds obvious. You may also want to try acrylic based ink. You'd probably have to use a calligraphy pen to apply it, which can be hard to get used to if you haven't used them already, but they produce really nice lines. You could also get fillable pens like Rapidographs, which I haven't used, mainly because they're very expensive. But yeah, the acrylic ink is a more resistant to water and isn't too much more expensive.
Laciesaurus-rexFeatured By OwnerApr 13, 2011Student Traditional Artist
You have the best dreams. *o* Mine always seem to go like "oh darn I missed the bus TWICE in one day and my assignment is late" or "goodness which brand of soap I can't decide i better spend 20 minutes walking up and down this aisle"